stomach's growling
pulse is elevated
palms sweating
mouth watering
hands shaking
foot tapping
head bobbing
focus lost
temple's throbbing
the pounding sensation increasing
feeling more and more
weak
at each moment's passing
but
you like this feeling
too lazy to feed the pains
stricken by the hunger
the heart pants
makes you stop
and think
realize that you are real
that you do feel
that you are not as independent as you think
the aches grow stronger
as the light dims
seconds grow longer
you feel faint
try to stand
it's an awkward restraint
unable to deal
you decide
to scrummage up a meal
roll over and get up
reach up
bend down
turn around
and serve
a dish is best cold
when your hunger is revenge
-aew 10
iWrite. simply said. simply put. but not always simply read. iWrite. iFeel. iRelate. iTranslate. iGive. iDirect. read. take it in. let it marinate. and comprehend. .
I found so many different meanings in this. But the one that has the greatest effect is hunger in its purest sense. So many people have no idea what real hunger is.
ReplyDeleteawe you're amazing. thanx darling
ReplyDeleteYou are talented!!! That's all I have to say. This poem could be about a simple sensation such as hunger which is significant cause you can create art out of it but it can also be used to describe diff situations and this right here is why you are such a good righter to me :)
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